Separate the Containment Protocols as well as the entire article into paragraphs. In some cases, they meld together.
Containment Protocols
Applications for testing must be submitted via authorization to an on-site overseer before testing is permitted.
You mentioned before how
approved for testing purposes by Level 4 or higher Research Personnel.
It seems like a contradiction. Do you need the permission of the on-site overseer or a 4 level or higher research personnel?
A ballistic resistant glass window is used for constant observation.
Currently, a colony of ███ RPC-531 instances has been recorded, with possible numbers increasing by unknown means or origin source, though it has been speculated that RPC-531 instances may have originated from a deeper sea level than originally perceived.
I would recommend splitting it into 2 sentences.
Description
Biologically, RPC-531 should have no natural means of breathing or eating or any biological need for food.
Awkward sentence.
In accordance with the baseline biology, RPC-531 should have no means of performing various life functions. These include respiration, nutrition, and excretion.
However, samples of various undigested flesh…
However, it has been observed that…
I would recommend varying the sentence structure. You started 2 successive sentences with "however".
The hair of RPC-531 is composed of several thick black strands that are animated to the will of RPC-531.
The hair-like structures of RPC-531 are composed of several thick black strands which the entity is capable of voluntarily animating.
To maximize the blood intake as well as reduce feeding time, the hairs of RPC-531 will pierce various points all over the victim's body.
I would recommend connecting this to the last paragraph.
It can be speculated that this method of infrasound communication contributes to the coordination of the instances during hunting. This results in grouped attacks on larger prey while only one instance of RPC-531 is within its immediate proximity.
This indicates that RPC-531 specimens show a higher level of intelligence while coordinating with other instances.
Incident Log-531-01 [03/21/██:
Researcher ████████ was seated by the desk facing the surveillance monitors showing the interior of Tank-05, drinking coffee, and eating a cafeteria snack.
RPC-531/2 stays behind to feed #yellow|on## the body of Brian Packard
ASF proceeded through the cafeteria, successfully incapacitating RPC-531/4 and RPC-531/3 with non-lethal electrical bullets.
and maintenance personnel were instructed to not attend to the unit even during breakdown.
Addendum-02
The swarm later turned their attention on the nearest MST Quebec-1 surveillance boat
Addendum-03
"cadaver of a pale naked baby" washed up on Kennebunk beach, whose oddities
the description of an RPC-531 instance.
the rise in water temperatures that the instances were not suitable for.
