All instances of RPC-XXX-C are to be equipped with individual identification tags fitted with and tracking devices. to allow personnel to find and collect specific instances for testing and general health analyses.
I know it sounds weird, but some information is better off not detailed. Why? Because it's easy to assume and fill in the blanks. ''Why do they need identification tags? Shoot, why wouldn't they? It's an anomaly after all!''
Once a month all RPC-XXX-C instances should be rounded up and have their pelts sheared by standard grade cotton shears. All RPC-XXX-C instances are to be sheared on a monthly basis.
I'm shamelessly copying some bits of Mann's critique here, however, he makes the point that ''it could be more clinical''. Precision, clarity, concise. That's the main trick to good clinical writing, no fancy words needed!
Sheared pelts should be though only must be checked revised for instances of RPC-XXX-A. and in the case, an instance is found If detected, it should be transported transportation to Site-029's horticultural area may take place.
Try reading something out loud, and if it's too complicated, shorten it or reword it until it seems more appropriate.
RPC-XXX-A instances can only be cultivated and grown by permission of Site-029 director Ava Keynes, Cultivation of RPC-XXX-A is overviewed by [Level 4 Staff Member]. and all attempts of Unauthorized cultivation are to be will be met with relocation, reprimand, and disposal of the unauthorized instances.— the possibility of an immediate demotion.
Minor rewording, to really hammer in that you should ask permission before doing something stupid.
Now, Site Directors are at the top of a site administration, and for the most part, they dont/shouldn't handle anomalies directly. This task is best reserved for Senior Researchers, Lead Researchers, and Level 4 Personnel (more info here)
All RPC-XXX-A instances awaiting cultivation undergoing cultivation should be held in a temperature-controlled storage facility and instances should be must be checked monitored regularly constantly for the grow of mold and rot. All RPC-XXX-A instanced Any instance that show signs of mold and rot showing signs of the aforementioned are to be disposed of by utilizing a standard grade incinerator. this process should be repeated for excess instances of RPC-XXX-A.
You're switching up English Tenses a lot. Jumping from Present Simple to Present Perfect Continuous within a single paragraph. It's like, ''I am critting your draft, but you have been doing otherwise, while I am still writting''. Granted, if English is not your first language, I highly recommend sticking to Present Perfect Continuous, great for clinical writing, more so for actions that have taken place before, and are still taking place as of today.
When in preparation for planting RPC-XXX-A instances should be planted in a 15-acre greenhouse area located nearby the holding pen of RPC-XXX-C instances.
This information is poorly worded, but worse, it's redundant. You already stated where the instances can be cultivated and grown. And don't go back on that, because you'll mess up the pacing of your article!
Planted instances of RPC-XXX-A are to be kept in freshly tilled soil with a recommended pH level of between 6.0-8.0 and contain a high amount of nitrogen, phosphorus, and potassium.
Add this to the previous paragraph. You can do so in a footnote, should it become too wordy
Planted RPC-XXX-A instances should also be spaced out from other RPC-XXX-A and B instances by 1.5 meters. RPC-XXX-A and B instances should be watered twice a day by covering all the instances in a light mist of water.
Again, some information is better off not detailed. You already stated where to cultivate the seeds, and what specific conditions must be met. The rest is basic biology that is better off on a biology thesis.
When an instance of RPC-XXX-A is converted transitions into an instance of RPC-XXX-B, site personnel should are to regularly tend to the instance and regularly check for any chance of being infected with growth of fungus or mold. and should be doused with The appropriate pesticide should can then, be doused to treat such infections. such infection take place.
Believe it or not, there is a missing containment protocol here. What do we do when we get a fully grown sheep?
RPC-XXX-B instances should also be checked for damage on the stem, should the stem it be damaged, the affected RPC-XXX-B should be must be removed and disposed of by the previously mentioned aforementioned standard grade incinerator. RPC-XXX-B instances that mature into RPC-XXX-A instances should be must be moved out of the greenhouse area and be translated into the holding pen where it will be outfitted with an identification tag.
Oh there it is! But because it's in the wrong place, now the pacing of your article is kinda choppy. Information such as this should flow smoothly, so I recommend adding this at the very beginning of this paragraph.
Imma stop here cuz it's 1 AM over here