(account deleted) 26 Jan 2023 19:03
Another minicon entry! Thanks to Denial and Pierson for the crit!
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(account deleted) 26 Jan 2023 19:03
Photograph attached to original RPC-781 document.
I'm pretty sure there should be a "the" here
Quite the disturbing and picturesque anomaly. The reports have a fitting pace. And while some of the god's traits and dialogue made me fear I was going to witness the first RPC edition of Men's Love, he remained a mysterious but fascinating character, explaining just enough about himself.
Absolutely extraordinary writing. It doesn't spoil its worth by explaining itself, just enough to get your mind wanting more, the perfect time to end the article.
Fantastic. 5/5
Ewwwwwwwwwww
4/5
(Really good, though it feels like somethings were left mysterious for the sake of being mysterious, which I'm not the biggest fan of.)
Reread this with more knowledge about nihil. I can now confidently say that the above is completely false.
It is written extraordinarily well, and any worthwhile inquiries about how the anomaly works are answered in the journal.
Only part I found meh would be the very beginning of the journal, when he predicts his own descent. I get why it's there, but it is slightly awkward to read. That is nothing if not a nitpick, though.
5/5
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