RPC Authority

Haven't written an RPC in a while, so here's one. Decided to try out writing a Neutralized-class. Thank you for reading.

Thanks to Jokezm, LalliicSilviColden, and Superspambot for giving critique.

Forum draft
RPC-772 Image
Oh Ha-joong Image

This is very easy to read and while it can be too on the nose especially with Nihilism stuff like I would be more subtle with it I guess it’s still really good. The investigation section reminded me of 614’s cases and I think this does it better. 5 stars

Article is written, as Buttomber says, very well and is clear. While I am used to more subtlety in Nihil articles, I do not believe it would have worked very well in this story.

The narrative barely has anything to do with nihil other than namedrops and to skip the need for exposition. The substance is in Park and Oh, not in the pantheon or symbolism like 052 or 311. Therefore, further limiting their presence using subtle writing would call into question their mention.

I started laughing after realizing the point of the last log in the second collapsible. That got it past a 4

5/5