Thanks and Credit
My entry for the Missing RPC Contest, took a long time and many-a-critique to make.
Thanks to:
MF_TOMB and
Broken TV Stand: Early critique of a very rough first draft.
ForgottenAngel: Critique leading to developing the characters.
Superspambot: Critique leading to the realization of the article's communication issues.
High Gamma: Critique which gave perspective on the setting as well as leading to developing the emotional investment.
Raggabrash and
televisionist: Critique leading to final touch ups.
Critique thread: http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-16028141/vampire-forest-missing-rpc
Picture is from: https://commons.m.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Chupacabra_B%26W.jpg , Thanks to Bro dude for finding it.