The Winter War, the war that became a meme. Nice to see an RPC based on it, done really well.
What does the Finnish say? I can't find anything with my search engine
It's rather obvious that this RPC was based on Simo Hayha, the deadliest marksman in history, and it's rather well-written. However, I had a couple of problems with it. Firstly, you could have made the whole unmasking thing an incident report rather than a part of the description. Secndly, Hayha (or in this case, the RPC agent,) got shot in the face 11 days before the war ended. Was this around the same time they contained RPC-074?
I like the concept. I'm gonna give you a +1. However, the article could use a little work.
I have several issues:
1: The tone is off. "Snowy-white" is rather flowery, and there are various other examples of this.
2: It's the White Death as an anomaly, and only that.
3: The grammar is off.
4: The Authority is impossibly advanced.
I apologize for my rating.
I think the author forgot to replace the Xs from this sentence "RPC-XXX leaves no tracks or traces of its presence behind."
Edit: Since the author didn't reply to my comment from 15 days ago, I went ahead and edit the Xs
While its cool seeing 'The white death' as an Anomalous entity, i think there could be more done to the uniqueness of the entity, Although there is a nice touch with the legends of him possibly existing before the winter war. Maybe hint more as him being an ancient Finnish guardian with some sort of ye olde story tied to it, just some suggestions to add more flavor to this RPC.