Interesting concept, but the tone is quite limiting. Frequent grammatical errors.
I will give 2 examples.
All usage of the RPC must be catalogued in an accompanying notebook, including the following details:
No one calls them RPCs in-universe. It's "RPC-144" or "the object". RPC-144 is much more preferable and clinical between the two options.
of similar size to a violin,
Ok, so how big is that? Give an actual dimension. Something like "approximately 5cm*5cm*5cm" would be much easier to imagine.
2 now because it's unfortunately too hard to read.