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Shoot Thanks for that catch. I think I fixed it but case I didn't here's the link again.

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/lettucethekid

You've misformatted your link my dude-it's going to "example.com" instead of your sandbox page.

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pixelatedharmonypixelatedharmony 21 Jan 2022 06:43
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-381

The visual elements here really push this over the top in helping illustrate this without pushing it too far. Overall, basically a perfectly executed monster-of-the-week type confic, well done. I don't know how you could have pulled this idea off better than you did here.


Such is life in the Soviet Union

***** by pixelatedharmonypixelatedharmony, 21 Jan 2022 06:43

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/lettucethekid

Does this fit the universe?
What other subcategories do I include?
The source of the picture is the Amazon, how do I source that?
What suggestions for the formatting do you think I should use other than what I used?

Papal_GuardPapal_Guard 21 Jan 2022 01:13
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-558

It's nice to see my idea has come to fruition with your writing experience, but I think a "exploration log"(like in RPC-580) possibly made by the team that was doomed by Petrov attempting to kill the controller would be very interesting, similiar to how it actually happens in the inspiratory film.

by Papal_GuardPapal_Guard, 21 Jan 2022 01:13
Papal_GuardPapal_Guard 20 Jan 2022 23:54
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-840

This article, or rather the RPC itself as someone previously mentioned, looms over us in a weirdly cosmic horror feel despite the art itself being classified as "dystopian surrealism".It makes us in the context of the article feel hopeless and small if the advanced society of the Venusians had this much of a cataclysmic collapse, how will we fair?

The RPC-840-5 infection spreading over the car in the third picture reminds me of the blood vines the Martians created in the 2005 film WoTW, as did the art remind me so much of Beksiński's art that I rushed to mention it until I read that it literally is his.

5 stars.

by Papal_GuardPapal_Guard, 20 Jan 2022 23:54
Papal_GuardPapal_Guard 20 Jan 2022 22:52
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-668

Love it, although I would have loved it more to have seen the British personnel try to interact with it more outside of combat and make a "interview" of sorts.The references to Argentina post-war harboring german WC are hilarious not only for just knowing they did, but also this machine somehow being aware of this and likening their invasion of the Falklands to the Blitz.

by Papal_GuardPapal_Guard, 20 Jan 2022 22:52
High GammaHigh Gamma 20 Jan 2022 05:41
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Book of Simeon

[hands rubbing]

by High GammaHigh Gamma, 20 Jan 2022 05:41
High GammaHigh Gamma 20 Jan 2022 05:39
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-381

I'd say this is a good little horror article. I got some minor nitpicks, like [DATA REDACTED] instead of [REDACTED], but I'll let you know via Discord because of how minute they are.

4 stars well deserved.

by High GammaHigh Gamma, 20 Jan 2022 05:39
High GammaHigh Gamma 20 Jan 2022 05:29
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-264

A fun little article, I liked it for what it was. But, the clinical tone as Jimmy stated is all over the place, it's seriously strong in the Containment Procedures but it gets sloppy on the Addenda, the cherry on top of the article (Mishaps? Really?).

I'm a big fan of short articles and Alpha-class anomalies. This deserves a 3.75 so I'm rating it a 4.

by High GammaHigh Gamma, 20 Jan 2022 05:29
by FortunaeFortunae, 20 Jan 2022 02:17
JakisPorusJakisPorus 19 Jan 2022 21:02
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-PL-006 EN

Code of War
Original: RPC-PL-006 by Sharha
Translated by: JakisPorus, with crit from Sharha, and TTPY.


by JakisPorusJakisPorus, 19 Jan 2022 21:02

I like it. It's short and simple. Some descriptions are a bit confusing and don't make points clear, but the crit I gave should help clear those segments up.

The article is quite short though, I feel like there's more here. Maybe Blue Book tries to drop kill it to no avail. Or maybe Nihil tries to lure it into attacking an alien colony. Some climax at the end to top this whole thing off would do this article wonders.

As of now, I'd give the article
3.8 Stars
Crits included
4.2 Stars
Crits + Revamped Ending
4.5 Stars

H F DummieH F Dummie 19 Jan 2022 18:06
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-870

SPAMBOT YOU'RE STAFF

POST CRIT POST REEEEE

by H F DummieH F Dummie, 19 Jan 2022 18:06
JimmyBoyHahaJimmyBoyHaha 19 Jan 2022 15:17
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-263

Well, this is just fucking awesome. An evocative story along with insane imagery. +5


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by JimmyBoyHahaJimmyBoyHaha, 19 Jan 2022 15:17
JimmyBoyHahaJimmyBoyHaha 19 Jan 2022 10:39
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-320

To me, this should've been more subtle. It has a nice and creepy core anomaly, but then it starts veering into the lane of a monster-that-kills-people article once it starts describing how RPC-320 is attacking MST members, which really hurts this piece. This also flows kinda poorly: It urgently says that the anomaly is becoming agitated and attacking people, then halts to tell you how the milk turns people into cows. Addendum 1 doesn't add anything, just reiterating the point that RPC-320 is attacking the MST, and Addendum 2 just didn't get any reaction out of me other than "huh, ok".

Overall, creepy concept but shoddy execution. +2


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by JimmyBoyHahaJimmyBoyHaha, 19 Jan 2022 10:39

Overall, this GRP caught my interest all the way towards the end. However, it kinda… just ends. I do wish there's more we can read about regarding those creatures, perhaps further encounters with those eldritch creatures.

You got the right mystery of an eldritch creature, the horror of the unknown, but it just kinda ends like an unsolved detective mystery. Feel free to brainstorm with me on Discord.

JimmyBoyHahaJimmyBoyHaha 18 Jan 2022 15:30
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-264

This one has a simple but fun concept, and the discovery section takes it in a messed-up direction that I like. However, the article is bogged down a bit by some odd phrasing/clinical tone (e.g. "the subject dries completely out of blood and instantly dies"), as well as the two addendums not really feeling like they went anywhere. +3


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by JimmyBoyHahaJimmyBoyHaha, 18 Jan 2022 15:30

I am replying to hopefully catch the attention of TTPY.
If this breaks any rules pls tell me

by TTPYTTPY, 18 Jan 2022 03:06
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