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Hello! I am Dusk Neoka (often referred to as Duskie, Mothcunt, Morthy Duskus, or Dr. Rota on other sites).

I am an aspiring Sci-Fi/Horror Author that has come here to write various anomalies entities mainly for fun. Funny enough, I never actually have step foot on the SCP wiki before coming here and I specifically chose this site because it has a significantly better classification system than SCP's.

I am probably gonna be here for a while, but other than writing I enjoy table-top roleplay (D&D being a personal favorite), playing video games, and being envious towards VTubers because they can do what I cannot (best not to discuss why).

Dusk's Cool Introduction. by DuskNeokaDuskNeoka, 24 Apr 2024 16:14

That is the entire point of the joke.

The "very original" part of the title is sarcasm, and it is implied when I said "a statue that kills you when nobody is looking at it".

I do not want to explain this obvious shitpost any further.

Re: A very original concept by DuskNeokaDuskNeoka, 24 Apr 2024 13:20
RaggabrashRaggabrash 23 Apr 2024 05:30
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-434

While I like this premise it feels incomplete, both because there are issues with grammar and tone, but also because I feel like more could have been done with the character. We don’t really get any insight into personality or anything. And the description of what the alternate universe versions are like feels poorly done and barebones. I think this has potential but for now it feels like a first draft. 1/5


Situation normal, Cap'n! Spiraling out of control!

by RaggabrashRaggabrash, 23 Apr 2024 05:30
TomatointheMirrorTomatointheMirror 22 Apr 2024 18:48
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-431

not really feeling this one. the effects are too inconsistent and the story is too cagey to latch onto anything. I just finished reading this and I could hardly tell you what happens in it. I guess there's something possessing the rides, but that's about all I could gleam. it just seems like a bunch of random stuff happens and then it's over.

by TomatointheMirrorTomatointheMirror, 22 Apr 2024 18:48

The science jargon ain't bad, it really gives it that… feel, that I think you're looking for. But I gotta agree with what Televisionist said, it's a well written article, images are a nice add, the jargon is good jargon: But it's not cool at all, it doesn't have much to really do anything.

Really I think this is a FANTASTIC base for an addition about the Infoplane, it's got a nice condensed amount of info, it's got the principles, it has information. But you gotta add some zing to it, some bang to it. That's all I gotta say about that.

What do I recommend you do to spice it up? Well, I'd recommend that you add to the "results" of it which you mention. It's nice to read all the base, but it leaves you sad when there's nothing afterwards.

But regardless I'll hold to what I said, it's a very good base for something, it's just not fully developed yet.

I know that you're joking.

You're referring to weeping angels, I guess. But would that idea be not original?


O/

The article is too short. You need to show your anomaly being utilized and try to flesh out the concept. There's really not much to say at first glance than that.

This is a joke lol.

Plus, the moving statue thing has been a trope in movies long before SCP. This is more of a joke of that.

Re: A very original concept by DuskNeokaDuskNeoka, 18 Apr 2024 13:57

No, not wanna copy from that other fictional site.


O/

by Commander Vil KleistCommander Vil Kleist, 18 Apr 2024 11:08
LO-XXXs
Commander Vil KleistCommander Vil Kleist 17 Apr 2024 15:13
in discussion Writing & Drafts / Drafts » LO-XXXs

Greetings,

Hope you provide crit for my LO-XXXs under the PFLOI section.

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/cmdvk.

Thanks.


O/

LO-XXXs by Commander Vil KleistCommander Vil Kleist, 17 Apr 2024 15:13

[[include component:rate]]

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Registered Phenomena Code: XXX

Object Class: Alpha-White

Hazard Types: Sapient Hazard, Transmutation Hazard

Containment Protocols: RPC-XXX is to be assigned a single standard human containment chamber. Interviews must be conducted on a weekly basis with both units present. RPC-XXX may be granted basic requests for as long as it continues behaving friendly and cooperative with Authority staff. Resources should be allocated towards the research of transferring conciousness with the use of RPC-XXX.

Description: RPC-XXX is a young man's conciousness shared by two bodies (units, hereafter.) Physical examination and DNA sampling reveals units are identical in nature. The subject is capable of inhabitting each unit seperately, but is limited in movement and speech to one at a time, the other not in use becoming idle. The unit chosen from which the young man will act and speak from at any given time is currently unpredicatble and the interval of conciousness relocation can range from two (2) seconds to five (5) hours.

The subject can be described as a pale, blonde male in his late twenties. Subject appears willing to assist research staff in the understanding of its anomalous properties. Staff assigned to the subject regard the young man as charismatic, intelligent, pleasing to converse with but cold at times. The subject's origins or the exact method in which it is able to relocate its conciousness is not yet understood at this time.

The Young man with Two Bodies by themayorthemayor, 16 Apr 2024 16:40

2/5. I could give it a 4/5 for construction alone, but I've decided against it on principle.

It's boring, I don't know what to say. Everything sounds technically correct, but you're missing the most important part of an article: Why I care. Look up Chekov's gun. Metaphorically speaking, a gun on the wall that's never used is not a gun; it's just a decorative piece of metal. And any piece of lore, which is just science gobblity-gook and doesn't lead to any practical applications or implications, isn't lore. It just ends up being filler on the Site. The article is well-written: It doesn't have that many SPAG errors. But it doesn't add anything to the mythos of the Site. No writer will read this nine times out of ten and parse whatever formulas you use. No one will reference it by itself when writing about Memotics in the future because it doesn't broadly affect anything in lore.

Look at Fallout. No writer cares about nuclear physics because radiation is cool by itself. We, the readers, care about the rules of radioactivity because the practical applications of its use broadly affect the world of Fallout. It affects how we view their resources and use of power. That's why we care that Nuka Cola Quantum is made out of Strontium or that fusion cores are basic cold fusion. I don't care about memotic physics because it adds nothing to the setting. It does not affect the view or present new threats to the world or possibilities. It's like if Star Trek did an episode on the concept of FTL tech but never had FTL tech.

Give this article some application, implications, and a reason to worldbuild. You need something more than adding world mechanics just because you can; you must add a reason for them to exist. You have to make something interesting to me, the reader, who is not fascinated with pseudo-science. A pile of gunpowder and a match is a powder cake I can watch go up in flames and gawk at. A pile of gunpowder with no match is just a smelly pile of dust with a lot of potential energy that ultimately goes unused.

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/the-physics-of-the-infoplane

Proposal for a more detailed physics of the infoplane. I tried to get it to not contradict any articles already made, but there may be somethings I missed.

If anything is unclear, please tell me and I'll try to explain it, and make it more understandable.

A statue that kills you when nobody is looking at it

A very original concept by DuskNeokaDuskNeoka, 12 Apr 2024 17:28

Sorry for wasting your time, this RPC isnt meant to really mean anything.

Also I want my 5$ pls put this down

I think the basic concept could make for a decent -J article, but I think this still needs some more work. It doesn't really feel like you're using the concept to its fullest potential. Maybe ask some people on the Discord what they think.


Situation normal, Cap'n! Spiraling out of control!

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/fourth-wall-break

please decline, I want $5

(Note: This is a shitpost made by me and my friends at school. Do not take this seriously lol)
(Feel free to actually put it down)

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/dattop16

I come back to you now, at the turn of the swag.

Dattop RPC Draft by DattopDattop, 09 Apr 2024 06:41

SPAG in Google Docs, actually provided by the Critee for once (thank you). Here's my overall thoughts:

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