RPC-631 is to be kept in an 11'x12' steel-reinforced concrete containment chamber.
This measurement is inconsistent with the rest of the article
At least 2 Security Personnel must be in the entity's containment
security personnel
By no means should one ever break this policy.
The sentence is informal and unnecessary
Authority Security Team […] the security forces
Do you mean the Authority Security Force / ASF?
RPC-631 must never come in contact with any objects that hinder its tekskinesis […] RPC-631 possesses "tekskinesis"
A footnote is warranted to explain the etymology of tekskinesis
Tekskinetisis: The ability to bend reality concerning the use of textiles or woven material
Tekskinesis?
unless it is for the sake of testing or the recontainment process.
unless for testing purposes.
(75cm height, 600g weight)
Width?
Two ovoid, plastic beads are centered near the upper half of RPC-631 — aburn in color — of which consensus believes them to act as the entity's eyes.
What is an “upper half”?
Two ovoid, plastic auburn beads — always positioned toward — of which consensus believes them to act as the entity's eyes.
indirectly controlling personnel through the crude posing of their articles of clothing.
Here it is acknowledged that RPC-631 can indeed affect personnel through clothing, this fact was not mentioned in the Containment Protocol.
Within a 17.6-meter range, RPC-631, has demonstrated short-range teleportation through textiles.
Extra comma after “RPC-631”
While likely not sapient, the entity discerned clear signs of sentience
display clear signs
and has been noted to have a mischievous personality with incidents of generally chaotic behavior that are infamous among staff.
, a mischievous personality has been inferred from its chaotic behavior.
RPC-631 has been reported to walk underneath personnel's legs,
Move underneath
Other reports have stated that it purposefully enters other containment chambers (that do not belong to it) during breaches and constantly lingers around the other anomalous presence within the chamber in hopes that it would breach the moment Authority personnel enter.
Cases of deliberate sabotage have also been documented, RPC-631 is known to intrude into chambers of other RPCs in hopes of breaching containment.
Although, RPC-631 is capable of avoiding most attacks heading directly towards it.
capable of avoiding aggression directed towards it
Unnecessary comma after “Although”
Comma after “towards it” instead of period
The reason on why RPC-631 has these emotions towards these objects are currently unknown. But using them in the event of a containment breach against RPC-631 has shown to be somewhat effective.
The reasons for RPC-631’s reactions are currently unknown, but
any of the liquids previously mentioned
any of the aforementioned liquids
the entity will exert
release
Puppet Master
puppeteer
RPC-631 was within one of its corners in a containment chamber, as the door to its containment chamber were opened.
RPC-631 hid at the corner of it containment chamber as it was being opened.
Guard 1 would threaten RPC-631 to get back in its containment, or they will use excessive force as the other two pointed their rifles at RPC-631.
Makes more sense to name your characters. It doesn’t make sense to threaten the anomaly when it’s not even certain it is sapient or have any understanding of speech
Use of force in this incident lacks discipline and seem unprofessional.
In a manner similar to that of the hallway gag in "Scooby Doo".
Which summarize the tone of the incident, unprofessional writing and the acknowledgement of it being “Scooby Doo” clashes with fact that this is nominally a real life setting and not a comedy.
Everything else in the Containment Protocols will remain relatively the same, however we will now prohibit the use of firearms or melee weapons against RPC-631 and will start using fabric softener or bleach to retrieve it once it breaches. This has proven during testing to be a great solution towards it and it would be foolish to not use it.
Containment Protocols is now updated to prohibit the use of firearms against RPC-631, instead, fabric softener or bleach will be used for recontainment. This has proven during testing to be a great solution towards it and it would be foolish to not use it.
and had avoided capture for the entire period.
had evaded
The following was archived of when the two crossed paths:
Unnecessary(?)
RPC-631 would enter the same containment sector the RPC-239 was taking place while four members of the AST attempted to capture it.
the recontainment of RPC-239
ASF
. Dr. Yetwoods and RPC-239 were genuinely startled by this, as the two were completely unaware of this possibly occurring.
, startling both Dr. Yetwoods and RPC-239.as the two were completely unaware of this possibly occurring.
According to archived video feed, RPC-239 then expressed great anger towards RPC-631 and tried to punch the lower half of its body. RPC-631 managed to avoid it and had bashed it had bashed its own hand against a solid, metal table. RPC-239 would hold its hand while glaring at RPC-631 in an angered matter before getting up from its chair and attempting to kick RPC-631 across the room. The entity would dodge the kick which would cause RPC-239 to kick its own head as its leg made a full u-turn, RPC-239 would fall to the ground.
RPC-239 then expressed great anger towards RPC-631 and attempted to punch RPC-631. RPC-631 managed to avoid it, RPC-239 instead bashed its own hand against a solid, metal table. RPC-239 would hold its hand while glaring at RPC-631 in an angered manner before getting up from its chair and attempting to kick RPC-631 across the room. The entity would dodge the kick, causing RPC-239 to kick its own head as its leg made a full u-turn, RPC-239 would fall to the ground.
restrain RPC-239 and would manage to spray RPC-631 with fabric softener.
and would manage to spray RPC-631
RPC-239 will be relocated to a different site after this encounter
It made more sense that it was RPC-631 that was moved rather than RPC-239 as it was contained at Site-002 ever since its discovery
And due to the rate on how RPC-631, this feelings will only get stronger as time goes on.
Unnecessary sentence
One senior guard who was nicknamed "Lt. Grant" had gained general hatred towards RPC-631,
Again, why don’t you just name them?
the entity began excreting some form of cotton from its surface in which the Security Team began restraining Lt. Grant for the safety of RPC-631.
surface, at which point security staff restrained Lt. Grant
This was considered an admission to on purposefully torturing RPC-631 and a hate crime against it.
admission to purposefully
Lt. Grant was later charged with demotion, and was now considered a Confined Subject (Disposable) for torture,
was later demoted to a Level-1 Confined Subject (Disposable)
This is somewhat excessive as a punishment
But those traits don't define on what it truly is.
don’t define what it truly is